Phân tích "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ""Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.

"Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • • Main idea: If people remain vigilant to avoid severe ailments, they stand a lower chance of contracting them
      • Supporting idea: Human health can be reinforced and maintained effectively in the long term via varied approaches like dieting, exercising, and even spiritual therapy. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "approach" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • If all people become fully convinced of the importance of choosing healthy diets involving less meat and more vegetables instead of consuming junk food, they will start to adopt such a healthy lifestyle and, therefore, will be able to avoid a host of health problems.
        • Working out on a daily basis will result in fewer patients visiting hospitals, thus reducing the amount of money spent on hospitalization and other medical fees. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase "every day" trong tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • • Main idea: this strategy appears more time- and cost-effective
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: Once a patient is diagnosed with cancer, he or she will either pour their fortunes into immediate treatment, or choose to wait for their inevitable doom >> All this money can be well-saved, and time can be lengthened, thanks to proper preventative schemes.

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