Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý một vài ideas từ thầy Simon như sau:

1. WHY POLICE SHOULD USE GUNS

• Many criminals use weapons
• The threat of a gun can deter criminals
• Police officers can forces a criminal to surrender
• It is easier to arrest someone and avoid physical violence
• The police may shoot violent criminals in self defence
• They can protect the public
• They can shoot an escaping criminal who poses a serious danger to the public

2. WHY POLICE SHOULD NOT CARRY GUNS

• There is a risk of accidents and mistakes
• The police might shoot an unarmed criminal or an innocent person
• Accidents can happen in public places
• There are several alternatives to guns (e.g tear gas, sprays and electric shock weapons)
• Only special police units should use guns

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Armed police can respond quickly to potential armed threats, increasing the likelihood of neutralizing dangerous situations promptly.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Armed police officers are equipped to defend themselves and others in high-risk situations. 
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  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: The presence of armed police may act as a deterrent to potential criminals, reducing the incidence of armed crimes.
      • Supporting idea: 
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