Phân tích "The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 23/12/2022)

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The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010.

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  • Overall:
  • Body 1: Viết biểu đồ 1. 
    • Viết về Sydney + Perth + Adelaide: 
      • The proportion of Sydney occupies the leading place (nêu số liệu)
      • The second place and third place were owned by Perth and Adelaide respectively (nêu số liệu)
    • Viết về Canberra + Melbourn: 
      • The lowest percentage, which was around 5%, belonged to Melbourne.
  • Body 2: Viết biểu đồ 2 
    • Viết về Melbourn + Canberra: 
      • The figure for Melbourne rose from 80% in… to 90% in…., making it the city where the private car was most popular. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "popular" tiếng anh 
    • Viết về Adelaide + Perth + Sydney: 
      • Although the citizens in the city of Sydney constituted the smallest proportion in private transportation, it still underwent an increase, from 20% in…  to 25% in… 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The line graphs illustrate (minh họa) the percentage of people using public transport and private cars in five Australian cities — Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Canberra, and Melbourne — between 2000 and 2010.

Overall, the proportion of people using public transport was highest in Sydney throughout the period, while Melbourne recorded the lowest figures. In contrast, the opposite pattern was observed in private car usage, with Melbourne leading the list and Sydney at the bottom.

In terms of public transport, Sydney occupied the leading place (giữ vị trí dẫn đầu), starting at around 45% in 2000 and climbing slightly to nearly 50% by 2010. Perth ranked second (xếp thứ hai) with approximately 30% at the beginning of the period, followed by Adelaide (xếp thứ ba), whose proportion remained stable at roughly 25%. At the lower end, Canberra and Melbourne (hai thành phố có tỉ lệ thấp nhất) had the smallest shares, both at below 10%, with Melbourne’s figure standing at just 5%.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Turning to private car usage, Melbourne recorded (ghi nhận) the highest rate, rising steadily from 80% in 2000 to 90% in 2010, making it the city where private vehicles were the most popular (được ưa chuộng) means of transport. Similarly, Canberra saw (chứng kiến) a gradual increase from about 70% to 80%. Although the citizens of Sydney represented the smallest proportion (tỉ lệ nhỏ nhất) of private transport users, the figure still rose slightly from 20% to 25% over the decade. Meanwhile, Adelaide and Perth (hai thành phố còn lại) experienced moderate increases, each by around 5%.

New Vocabulary Explanation

illustrate (minh họa): to show or explain something clearly with graphs or examples.
Synonyms: depict, demonstrate, portray
Antonyms: conceal, hide, obscure
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The line graphs illustrate the percentage of people...

occupy the leading place (giữ vị trí dẫn đầu): to take the top position.
Synonyms: rank first, top the list, take the lead
Antonyms: fall behind, rank last, lag behind
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Sydney occupied the leading place in public transport use.

popular (được ưa chuộng): liked or enjoyed by many people.
Synonyms: favored, preferred, well-liked
Antonyms: unpopular, disliked, rejected
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...making it the city where private vehicles were the most popular means of transport.

proportion (tỉ lệ): a part or share of a total amount.
Synonyms: percentage, fraction, ratio
Antonyms: whole, totality, entirety
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The proportion of people using public transport was highest in Sydney.

recorded (ghi nhận): officially noted or observed in data.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Synonyms: registered, documented, observed
Antonyms: ignored, omitted, disregarded
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Melbourne recorded the highest rate of car users.

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Sydney occupied the leading place, starting at around 45% in 2000 and climbing slightly to nearly 50% by 2010.
   → Complex sentence with participle clause (starting, climbing) for sequence.
   → Vietnamese translation: Sydney giữ vị trí dẫn đầu, bắt đầu ở khoảng 45% vào năm 2000 và tăng nhẹ lên gần 50% vào năm 2010.

2. Although the citizens of Sydney represented the smallest proportion of private transport users, the figure still rose slightly from 20% to 25% over the decade.
   → Complex sentence with concessive clause (Although...).
   → Vietnamese translation: Mặc dù người dân Sydney chiếm tỉ lệ nhỏ nhất trong việc sử dụng phương tiện cá nhân, con số này vẫn tăng nhẹ từ 20% lên 25% trong suốt thập kỷ.

3. Making it the city where private vehicles were the most popular means of transport.
   → Reduced relative clause used for cause/effect.
   → Vietnamese translation: Khiến nó trở thành thành phố mà phương tiện cá nhân là hình thức di chuyển được ưa chuộng nhất.

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