Phân tích "Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people work for the same organisation all their working life 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về individual): Having the same job throughout their lives gives them financial stability.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "exclusive" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:  Long term employees normally accrue financial rewards such as a higher salary and a decent pension plan
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về company and society) job hoppers will not be able to contribute to their company long-term >> reduce productivity & lead to uncertainty for the company     >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích: Contribute to sth
      • Supporting idea:  If someone cannot promise to remain loyal to their company, then it would be counterproductive to hire and commit resources to them.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others think it is better to work for different organisations. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: People working for a variety of companies are given more opportunities to learn different skills. 
      • Supporting idea: When workers start a new job, they will be exposed to new co-workers and a different corporate culture that shows them how to do things differently.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "expose" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: People get a chance to do that job which they want. 
      • Supporting idea: People can get a higher position in a new company which the old one did not provide them >> If people do a job for an organization for several years, but the company does not increase their salary, so it is good to switch to another company which offers them a good salary.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ 
      • Example: 

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