Phân tích "“People who have been in a foreign country should accept the new culture or form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle”. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Writing,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "“People who have been in a foreign country should accept the new culture or form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle”. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

“People who have been in a foreign country should accept the new culture or form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle”. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm accept the new culture
      • Main idea 1: Embracing the new culture can foster integration, promote understanding, and facilitate meaningful interactions with the local community. 
        • Supporting idea: It allows individuals to adapt to local customs, language, and social norms, which can lead to enhanced social cohesion. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "adapt" 
        • Example: Many immigrants who arrive in the United States choose to embrace American culture while retaining elements of their own heritage. They learn English, participate in local traditions and celebrations, and adapt to American social norms. 
      • Main idea 2: Adapting to the new culture facilitates smoother interactions in various aspects of life, including work, education, and daily interactions. 
        • Supporting idea: It helps minimize misunderstandings, bridge communication gaps, and promotes harmonious relationships. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote" 
        • Example: Adapting to the new culture helps international students navigate the academic environment more effectively. By familiarizing themselves with the education system, learning styles, and academic expectations of the host country, they can engage more confidently in class discussions, collaborate with peers, and perform well in assignments and exams.
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm  form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: Preserving one's cultural identity in a foreign country contributes to the richness and diversity of the local community. 
        • Supporting idea: It allows for cultural exchange, fostering mutual respect, and understanding among different groups. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ "respect" trong tiếng anh 
        • Example: In multicultural cities, Chinese communities organize vibrant Chinese New Year celebrations that showcase traditional customs, performances, and cuisine. These festivities, such as dragon dances, lantern festivals, and firework displays, bring a unique cultural experience to the local community, allowing people from different backgrounds to learn about and appreciate Chinese traditions.
      • Main idea 2: Maintaining cultural values, traditions, and lifestyle can provide a sense of belonging and identity for individuals, particularly in diaspora communities. 
        • Supporting idea: It helps preserve heritage, family traditions, and a sense of continuity for future generations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ"preserve"tiếng anh 
        • Example: The Vietnamese diaspora celebrates the Lunar New Year, known as Tet, with great enthusiasm. Families gather to pay respects to ancestors, exchange good wishes, and share traditional meals. 
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Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0