Phân tích "It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE (VIẾT VỀ INDIVIDUALS)
    • Main idea: At an age prior to 30, women’s body is ready for pregnancy
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Fertility is high, and the risk for complications, such as hypertension or gestational diabetes, is low.
        • From a strictly biological perspective, the best time for conceiving and carrying a baby is before being 30 years old
        • Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE (VIẾT VỀ SOCIETY)
    • Main idea: Having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
      • Example: 

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