Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 28/3/2024)
I. Đề bài
People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
- Main idea 1: Texting allows individuals to communicate without the need for immediate responses.
- Supporting idea: People can respond at their own pace, fitting communication into their busy schedules.
- Example: A 2018 study in Computers in Human Behavior found that participants favored texting over phone calls and face-to-face interactions due to its asynchronous nature, citing reduced pressure for instant replies, increased flexibility and control, and improved multitasking efficiency.
- Main idea 2: Unlike phone calls, where both parties need to be available simultaneously, texting allows for asynchronous communication. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Supporting idea: This flexibility is especially beneficial when coordinating with people in different time zones or with conflicting schedules.
- Main idea 1: Texting allows individuals to communicate without the need for immediate responses.
- Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - disadvantages > advantages
- Main idea 1: Text messages often lack the tone of voice and nonverbal cues present in face-to-face or phone conversations.
- Supporting idea: This can sometimes lead to misunderstandings or misinterpretations of the message's intent.
- Main idea 2: Unlike phone calls, where responses are immediate, text messages may not receive an instant reply.
- Supporting idea: This delay can lead to frustration, especially in situations requiring urgent communication.
- Example: In a real-life scenario, imagine a project manager urgently needing approval from a client for a crucial decision. The manager sends a text message outlining the situation and awaits a response. However, as text messages don't guarantee instant replies, the client's delay in responding creates frustration for the manager, potentially causing setbacks in the project timeline.
- Main idea 1: Text messages often lack the tone of voice and nonverbal cues present in face-to-face or phone conversations.
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
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