Phân tích "Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

You have been asked to write about the following topic.

Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: children can learn through play because they can develop motor and cognitive skills through games and sports they play. >> IELTS tUtOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "develop" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Children can be taught by playing, particularly when they are very young and are still improving important cognitive and motor skills. 
        • If parents think that their children will learn only if they study or do serious activities during their free time, it is a misguided idea.
      • Example: For instance, some sports activities like soccer, baseball, basketball and so on not only teach a skill but also teach how to work as a team towards a common goal.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Children ought to be allowed to spend quality time in authentic recreational activities which in turn stimulates the children’s interest and joy in learning
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Through the short break between study periods, children can refresh them from stress which ultimately resulting in efficient study. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "Study" như danh từ trong tiếng anh
        • The lack of sports time affects children’s emotional development, resulting in the rise of depression, anxiety and problems of attention.
      • Example: 

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