Phân tích "In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: it cannot be denied that implementing high tax on junk food would discourage consumers, especially children, from eating so much it. >> IELTS TUTOR phân biệt cách dùng consumers / users
      • Supporting idea: As a result, they will turn to spend their part time cooking at home to save money. 
      • Example: 
        • Take Denmark as a telling example, It was one of the first countries to introduce high tax on fast food such as butter, potato chips and many processed foods.
        • In Britain, the authorities have imposed 12% more tax on junk food, and higher prices of this kind of food resulted in lower consumption of fast food.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Consuming too much fast food leads to many health related concerns.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Fast food contains certain ingredients which are extremely harmful to the human body. 
        • Such ingredients should be banned by the government to deal with the health problems arising out of its consumption. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "CONSUMPTION" 
      • Example: 
        • For instance, if a person consumes fast food daily, he is likely to face the problem of obesity after a while, followed by high blood pressure and high cholesterol. 
        • With the health problems suffered, he is likely to be the worker with the lowest productivity.

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