Phân tích "Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. 

What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: The main benefit of buying expensive toys is that they serve an educational purpose. 
        • Supporting idea: Parents believe that by playing with interactive games, children will enhance their learning skills and understanding >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "understanding" 
        • Example: For instance, children polish their lateral thinking while interacting with LEGO sets.
      • Main idea 2: Parents buy toys for their children so that it can compensate for the time they are unable to spend with children.
        • Supporting idea: In families where both parents work, it is extremely difficult for them to dedicate enough time to the children. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "dedicate" 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Large number of toys can make children addicted to them, which can lead to less interaction with other kids. 
        • Supporting idea: In the past, toddlers used to play outdoor games with their peers which in turn helped them develop skills such as leadership and team work. On the contrary, today’s children are becoming reclusive because they play alone with their toys. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: This could flourish into a negative, consumption-oriented habit, which can have further unending consequences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: This is because children may never understand the value of the toys they have; hence, they will never be content with what they have
        • Example: 

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