Phân tích"Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 17/06/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 17/06/2023)

Phân tích"Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 17/06/2023)

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: Online shopping allows people to browse and purchase products from the comfort of their own homes at any time.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • With just a few clicks, people can explore a wide range of products and make purchases without leaving their homes. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng động từ"discover"tiếng anh 
      • This eliminates the need to visit physical stores, saving time and effort.
      • Online stores operate 24/7, allowing shoppers to make purchases at their convenience, whether it's during the day, late at night, or on weekends. 
      • The ability to shop from home also provides a sense of comfort and relaxation, as individuals can avoid crowded places and long queues. 
    • Example: One real-life example of online shopping's convenience is the rise of e-commerce giants like Amazon. Through their platform, customers can easily search for and purchase a wide range of products, from electronics to clothing to household items, all from the comfort of their homes. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea:  Online platforms offer a wide range of products from different sellers, providing access to a larger selection than what may be available locally.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • This is because online platforms connect sellers from various locations, allowing them to showcase their products to a global customer base. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • As a result, consumers have the opportunity to explore and choose from a diverse range of products, brands, and styles that may not be easily accessible in their local stores. 
      • Whether it's niche products, unique designs, or international brands, online shopping opens up a world of options and expands the choices available to consumers.
    • Example: Online shopping in Vietnam has made it easier for people to buy a variety of products from different sellers, including international brands, through platforms like Shopee and Lazada.

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