Phân tích "One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea 1: (Viết về individuals) It will create problems for the elderly themselves as they often find it difficult to cope with the changing times >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "time" & "times"
        • Supporting idea: Since older people are reluctant to change and to adopt new technology, they may sometimes find it challenging to fulfil their basic needs >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "fulfil / fulfill" 
        • Example: For instance, many supermarkets or transportation systems use automated billing and ticketing systems that may put the elderly people behind the curve.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea 2: (Viết về society)  it puts a heavy burden on the healthcare system >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG TOPIC "IDEAL SOCIETY" 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Older people are more vulnerable to chronic diseases, such as heart attacks or diabetes, and that requires special medical treatments to be effectively treated >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu "TẤT TẦN TẬT" TỪ A ĐẾN Z TỪ VỰNG VỀ BỆNH DỊCH
          • The government might have to devote a larger budget to healthcare in order to serve the growing demands of an ageing population.
        • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: older people are an asset for the country as they will teach values and traditions to the younger generation, which would help the younger ones better understand the past.
        • Supporting idea:
          • They can give valuable advice and emotional support to younger generation in difficult times. 
          • They also take care of their grandchildren and teach them various life skills, moral and cultural values. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: people can live longer with their family and travel to various places.
        • Supporting idea: They can enjoy life longer and contribute more to the society. 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: (Viết về individuals) It will create problems for the elderly themselves as they often find it difficult to cope with the changing times >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "time" & "times"
        • Supporting idea: Since older people are reluctant to change and to adopt new technology, they may sometimes find it challenging to fulfil their basic needs >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "fulfil / fulfill" 
        • Example: For instance, many supermarkets or transportation systems use automated billing and ticketing systems that may put the elderly people behind the curve.
      • Main idea 2: (Viết về society)  it puts a heavy burden on the healthcare system >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG TOPIC "IDEAL SOCIETY" 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Older people are more vulnerable to chronic diseases, such as heart attacks or diabetes, and that requires special medical treatments to be effectively treated >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu "TẤT TẦN TẬT" TỪ A ĐẾN Z TỪ VỰNG VỀ BỆNH DỊCH
          • The government might have to devote a larger budget to healthcare in order to serve the growing demands of an ageing population.
        • Example: 

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