Phân tích"Number of visits to a community website: First and second years of use"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use

Number of visits to a community website: First and second years of use

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  • Overall:
    • Website traffic was significantly higher in the second year, with the peak number of visits taking place in June and July.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "peak" như động từ & danh từ
    • There are marked fluctuations in the number of people visiting to the community website over the period shown
  • Body 1: Viết số liệu September đến January 
    • In September of the first year, the number of users visiting the community website started at 2,500, which was around 1,500 lower than September in the second year.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"peak/highest/greatest"(Diễn tả ý đạt đến ...
    • This website enjoyed a tremendous increase in visit counts in the first year, reaching 10,000 visits in November. In the same month of the second year, website traffic increased to 17,000 clicks
  • Body 2: Viết số liệu Feb đến Aug
    • From Feb to March, the volume of users visiting in the first year hit its lowest point at 500 while it remained constant at 10,000 over the same period in the second year.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ Vựng & Cấu Trúc "line graph & biểu đồ có xu hướng th...
    • June, July and August were the three summer months that recorded the highest data (nêu số liệu), whereas highest access occurred in May, June and July (nêu số liệu) in the second year 

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The bar chart illustrates the number of visits to a community website during its first and second years of operation.

Overall, the website traffic was significantly higher in the second year, with the peak number of visits taking place in June and July. There were marked fluctuations in the number of people visiting the community website over the period shown.

In September of the first year, the number of users visiting the community website started at 2,500, which was around 1,500 lower than in September of the second year. This website enjoyed a tremendous increase in visit counts in the first year, reaching 10,000 visits in November. In the same month of the second year, website traffic increased to 17,000 clicks.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

From February to March, the volume of users visiting in the first year hit its lowest point at 500 while it remained constant at 10,000 over the same period in the second year. June, July, and August were the three summer months that recorded the highest data, with the first year seeing 15,000, 20,000, and 25,000 visits respectively. In contrast, the highest access occurred in May, June, and July in the second year, with figures of 20,000, 30,000, and 35,000 visits respectively.

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