Phân tích "Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping mall. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extant do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping mall. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extant do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping mall. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Spending too much time in shopping malls can also contribute to social isolation. 
      • Supporting idea: Young people may become disconnected from their communities and spend less time with their friends and family.
      • Example: For example, a teenager who spends all their free time at the shopping mall may miss out on opportunities to engage in other activities, such as sports or volunteering, which can provide social connections and a sense of community.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Shopping malls are designed to encourage people to buy things, and this can contribute to a culture of materialism. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Young people may come to value material possessions over more important things, such as relationships, personal growth, and meaningful experiences.
      • Example: For example, a young person who spends a lot of time at the shopping mall may feel pressure to keep up with the latest fashion trends and consumer products, even if they don't need or value these things. 

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