Phân tích "Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: One of the main reasons for this trend is the influence of advertising and marketing. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Companies invest heavily in promoting their products and creating a sense of desire and need in consumers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "invest" tiếng anh
        • As a result, people often feel compelled to buy things that they wouldn't have otherwise considered purchasing. 
      • Example: This is especially true in cases where the latest technology or fashion trends are concerned.
    • Main idea 2: Another factor that contributes to this trend is social pressure
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People often feel the need to keep up with their peers and to conform to social norms and expectations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "norm" tiếng anh
        • This leads them to buy things that they don't necessarily need in order to fit in and be accepted by others.
      • Example: For example, owning the latest smartphone or the newest car is often seen as a symbol of social status and success.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - both a positive and negative trend. 
    • Main idea 1: On the one hand, it drives economic growth and contributes to job creation, which can have a positive impact on society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When people buy more things, including items they don't necessarily need, it generates demand for goods and services, which drives economic activity and contributes to growth. 
        • As a result, companies increase production and hire more employees, which creates job opportunities and helps to reduce unemployment. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, it can have a negative impact on the environment.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Excessive consumption also contributes to environmental degradation, as the production of goods and services requires the use of natural resources and the release of pollutants into the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "PRODUCTION" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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