Phân tích"Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 9/12/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What factors cause this phenomenon? 
    • Main idea 1: we are living in a society that encourages mass production and consumption. 
      • Supporting idea: cheap, short-lived products are flooding the market and making it more convenient and cost-effective to replace things than ever before. 
      • Example: Fast fashion brands produce trendy clothes at low prices, but these clothes are often made from cheap materials and are not designed to last. This encourages people to buy new clothes frequently, even if their old clothes are still wearable.
    • Main idea 2: many people now consider shopping a way to show off their social status and wealth. 
      • Supporting idea: Aggressive advertising has instilled a misconception in many individuals that the possession of cutting-edge devices or products of internationally well-known brands will help them gain the respect and admiration of others. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
      • Example: A good illustration of this is that today some people have no hesitation in spending thousands of dollars buying the latest iPhone model, even though their current phones are still in good condition. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn cách dùng even if / even though / even so / even when tiếng anh
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      • Main idea: advertising could be the first culprit. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The major factor leading to the throw away culture is the influence of advertisements in different forms)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This seeds the interest in consumers which in turn encourage customers to buy the advanced goods mostly with an additional feature to the older ones.
        • Advertisements encourage people to purchase goods and services that they do not really need by delivering a message that possessing the latest version of an item could improve a person’s self-image, confidence and even social status.
      • Example: many of today’s teenagers spend nearly $1,500 buying iPhone X to show that they are wealthy and fashionable even though their old phones are still in good condition and perfectly functional. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spend" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What effects does the phenomenon lead to?
    • Main idea 1: They could easily get into serious debt if they get into the habit of buying the latest, novelty items. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "habit" & Collocation với "habit"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because they need to find different ways to satisfy their desire for shopping, meaning that they have to work harder and have more stress. 
        • Even worse, if they cannot manage their budget skilfully, they are likely to get stuck in a cycle of debt. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "likely" tiếng anh
      • Example: Many teens are being burdened with thousands of dollars in credit card debt for their unnecessary purchases, which could lead to depression and anxiety. 
    • Main idea 2:  Environmental degradation is another problem facing the throwaway society (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: mass production comes with a constantly increasing demand for materials, resulting in the depletion of natural resources)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Due to excessive production of disposable goods, huge amounts of hazardous waste are being discharged into the environment, which directly contaminates soil and water.
        • The amount of rubbish in the world has been increasing markedly in recent years, leading to the pollution of rivers, oceans and the soil as can be seen in many parts of the world.
      • Example: 

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