Phân tích"​Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 8.12.2022 & 2/3/2024)

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: These subjects are usually more difficult and demanding, which requires students to put much effort into their study. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Those subjects are often challenging and require a lot of diligence as well as a great deal of patience and intelligence)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A major in science consists of related subjects with a great amount of specialized knowledge and a number of experiments, which can be very tough.
        • Students are often put under pressure a lot of pressure in order to understand and handle the tasks well. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "pressure" như động từ và danh từ tiếng anh
      • Example: For instance, anatomy classes may involve extensive memorization of the human body's intricate structures, while clinical medicine requires students to apply theoretical knowledge to real-life patient cases. Additionally, medical students are often expected to participate in research, further adding to the complexity and demands of their coursework.
    • Main idea 2: Because there are currently fewer employment opportunities available for graduates in science fields, learners are less likely to decide to select these majors. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: employment opportunities in this particular field are limited and extremely competitive)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They tend to choose other subjects which allow them to find jobs more easily.
        • As a result, science subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to economics or business-related subjects >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh 
      • Example: In response to limited job opportunities in science fields, college students in the United States are increasingly favoring majors in business, technology, and healthcare, where employment prospects seem more promising. This trend reflects a pragmatic approach, with students opting for disciplines perceived to offer clearer paths to immediate employment after graduation.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: When fewer students decide to learn about science, there would be a serious shortage of employees working in these fields. 
      • Supporting idea: This would lead to fewer technological developments, which would also prevent improvements in people's life quality. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "improvement" tiếng anh
      • Example: The decrease in the number of scientists has resulted in a slowdown in medical research, causing delays in developing new medications and technologies, prolonged clinical trials, and postponed breakthroughs in disease treatment, ultimately impacting people's access to innovative treatments and adversely affecting overall healthcare. 
    • Main idea 2: While a significantly increasing number of students are choosing economics and business to study, the number of job vacancies in these areas is limited.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Because the number of science students is insignificant, other majors such as business or economics become prevalent, hence the imbalance in future workforce.
        • Many university graduates would have to face unemployment, which increases burden on society. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic Unemployment IELTS

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