Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, most people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this happening? Is this trend good or bad?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Nowadays, most people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this happening? Is this trend good or bad?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
- Main idea 1: Big cities often offer a wide range of job opportunities across various industries.
- Supporting idea:
- They attract individuals seeking better employment prospects, career growth, and higher salaries. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "employment" tiếng anh
- Urban areas tend to concentrate businesses, industries, and services, making them attractive to job seekers.
- Example: New York City is a global hub for finance, media, and technology. It is also home to a large number of other industries, such as fashion, arts, and entertainment. As a result, there are a wide variety of job opportunities available in New York City, for people with a variety of skills and interests.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Big cities are known for their concentration of reputable educational institutions, including universities, colleges, and research centers.
- Supporting idea: Many people move to cities to access quality education and enhance their knowledge and skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh
- Example: Boston is home to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, including Harvard University, Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT), and Boston University. Boston is also home to a number of other colleges and universities, as well as a number of research centers.
- Main idea 1: Big cities often offer a wide range of job opportunities across various industries.
- Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE
- Main idea 1: High cost of living, including housing, transportation, and general expenses.
- Supporting idea:
- Big cities often have a high demand for housing due to population density and the concentration of job opportunities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "demand" tiếng anh
- This demand can outpace the supply of affordable housing options, leading to increased prices and rental rates.
- Limited land availability for construction and zoning restrictions can further contribute to the high cost of housing.
- Example: San Francisco is one of the most expensive cities in the world, and the cost of living is a major factor in this. The median rent for a one-bedroom apartment in San Francisco is over $3,000 per month, and the median home price is over $1 million.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Increased competition for jobs and resources.
- Supporting idea:
- Big cities often serve as economic hubs, attracting a large number of businesses and industries. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"industry"tiếng anh
- The concentration of job opportunities in these cities leads to a higher demand for employment, resulting in increased competition among job seekers.
- Industries such as finance, technology, media, and creative sectors tend to cluster in urban areas, intensifying the competition for positions in these sectors.
- Example: Los Angeles is a major economic hub in the United States, and it is home to a large number of businesses and industries. The concentration of job opportunities in Los Angeles leads to a higher demand for employment, resulting in increased competition among job seekers.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: High cost of living, including housing, transportation, and general expenses.
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1
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