Phân tích "Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023 - Kèm bài sửa task response HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 7.5)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023)

Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: The desire for instant gratification, where people seek to have things done quickly, can be attributed to several factors in today's society. 
    • Main idea 1: One primary reason is the rapid advancement of technology, which has enabled instant access to information, services, and communication. 
      • Supporting idea: The rise of on-demand services and the convenience of digital platforms have created an expectation for immediate results. 
      • Example: 
        • With the advent of apps like Uber Eats, DoorDash, and Grubhub, people can order food from their favorite restaurants and have it delivered to their doorstep within minutes.
        • Similarly, instant messaging and social media platforms allow for immediate communication and information sharing. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"social media"tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, the fast-paced nature of modern life, with its busy schedules and competing priorities, has heightened the desire for efficiency and time-saving solutions.
      • Supporting idea: People are often juggling multiple responsibilities, such as work, family, and social commitments, which leaves them with limited time to accomplish their tasks and fulfill their needs.
      • Example: With increasingly demanding work schedules and limited time for meal preparation, many people opt for the convenience of ordering food through mobile apps or online platforms.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1:  On the positive side, instant access to information and services can enhance productivity, convenience, and efficiency. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: It allows for quick decision-making, saves time, and enables individuals to accomplish more in their daily lives. 
      • Example: For example, ordering groceries online and having them delivered within hours can save time and energy, especially for those with hectic schedules.
    • Main idea 2: However, it can lead to a sense of impatience and unrealistic expectations, as well as a decreased tolerance for delayed results. 
      • Supporting idea: This can result in shortcuts, superficial understanding, and a lack of thoroughness in tasks and decision-making. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "understanding" tiếng anh 
      • Example: One real example that illustrates the negative impact of the desire for instant results is the prevalence of online clickbait articles and headlines. In the pursuit of immediate information and entertainment, many people are drawn to catchy and sensational headlines without delving deeper into the content.

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