Phân tích "Nowadays, more and more people have consumer goods, such as refrigerator and or washing machines. Do you think this development has more advantages or disadvantage?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, more and more people have consumer goods, such as refrigerator and or washing machines. Do you think this development has more advantages or disadvantage?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays, more and more people have consumer goods, such as refrigerator and or washing machines. Do you think this development has more advantages or disadvantage?

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The production, use, and disposal of consumer goods contribute to resource depletion, waste generation, and carbon emissions. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase "consumer goods" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Manufacturing processes and the extraction of raw materials can have detrimental effects on the environment.
      • Example: The production of smartphones requires the extraction of various finite resources such as metals (e.g., gold, silver, copper), rare earth elements, and minerals. The extraction process involves mining activities that can lead to deforestation, habitat destruction, and soil and water pollution.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The emphasis on acquiring consumer goods can foster a culture of materialism, where possessions become a primary measure of success and happiness. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to excessive consumption, contributing to resource depletion and waste generation. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "CONSUMPTION" TIẾNG ANH 
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Consumer goods automate tasks, saving time and effort. Refrigerators keep food fresh, reducing frequent grocery trips, while washing machines simplify laundry, freeing up time for other activities.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Access to consumer goods enhances living standards, providing comfort and convenience. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: Refrigerators preserve food, reducing waste, and washing machines ensure clean and hygienic clothing, promoting overall well-being.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: The production, use, and disposal of consumer goods contribute to resource depletion, waste generation, and carbon emissions. 
        • Supporting idea: Manufacturing processes and the extraction of raw materials can have detrimental effects on the environment.
        • Example: The production of smartphones requires the extraction of various finite resources such as metals (e.g., gold, silver, copper), rare earth elements, and minerals. The extraction process involves mining activities that can lead to deforestation, habitat destruction, and soil and water pollution. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"deforestation"tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: The emphasis on acquiring consumer goods can foster a culture of materialism, where possessions become a primary measure of success and happiness. 
        • Supporting idea: This can lead to excessive consumption, contributing to resource depletion and waste generation.
        • Example: 

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