Phân tích"Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 writing)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: using a computer for a long time affects directly on eyes of children and their physical growth  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This habit has harmful effects on their mental and physical health)
      • Supporting idea:
        • This will increase many health issues and will strain our future generations.
        • Prolonged screen exposure will cause vision related issues alongside obesity because it does not involve any body movements.
      • Example: For example, children who allocate a substantial part of their time for video games are more likely to contract cardiovascular and osteoarthritis diseases. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: if they do not play outside sports, it will turn them into introverts who lack adequate communication skills.  
      • Supporting idea: When children spend long hours on the computer, they become isolated from the society/their peers
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác:
    • Main idea: The majority of games on electronic devices are violent rather than educational >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
    • Supporting idea: This means excessive exposure to those game plots builds up children’s mental impairment and tendency towards anti-social behaviors, contributing to higher crime rate in the future.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Parents may set strict schedules for children  to play computer games (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Parents can also set limits on the length of time games are played)
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: School and child’s guardian should pique their interest in outdoor activities by planning picnics or playing games with them. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Từ vựng topic "VIOLENCE & ARGUMENT" 
      • Supporting idea: School authorities should encourage them to play  interactive sports or engage in other creative activities like painting and music
      • Example: They may also organize trekking or hiking trips so that children can learn to appreciate nature.

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