Phân tích "Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: The primary reason that encourages the youth to opt for self-employment is the freedom that comes with it. 
      • Supporting idea: If a person is self-employed, he has the liberty to choose his working hours and plan his schedule. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: people face difficulty acquiring a job of their preference in the highly competitive market. 
      • Supporting idea: Individuals who want to work in an esteemed organization or a well paid job needs to possess high academic qualification degrees or years of work experience.
      • Example: 
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
      • Main idea: One of the main attractions of self-employment is the opportunity for higher earnings than you might receive when working for a company.
      • Supporting idea: If you work hard as a self-employed person, the financial rewards are potentially unlimited, especially with online businesses.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: there is no guarantee that a self employed person will earn enough to live a comfortable life. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When people work for a company, they have the assurance of a guaranteed paycheck at the end of the month; however, when they work for themselves this guarantee is missing.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: There is no guarantee of income, unlike those who receive regular pay cheques from their boss, and it’s not unusual to see new small businesses fail due to a lack of money)
        • This is quite daunting for people who have regular expenses such as a mortgage, and so many people prefer the safety afforded to them by working for someone else.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Many self employed people work day and night and do not get time to spend with their family and friends. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Working for yourself will usually entail working long hours, sometimes at weekends and in the evening, leaving little time for the kind of recreation time enjoyed by workers who simply stop work at around 5pm
        • It creates an imbalance in their work and personal life.
      • Example: 

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