Phân tích "Nowadays, doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (KÈM BÀI SỬA HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays, doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Doctors have a primary responsibility to prioritize patient health and well-being, regardless of their patients' wealth or status.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many doctors take the Hippocratic Oath, a solemn pledge that emphasizes the duty to put patients' interests above all else. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This commitment reinforces the idea that patient health should be the primary concern.

• • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Concentrating on patient health and well-being can enhance a doctor's reputation and foster greater trust between patients and healthcare professionals.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When doctors prioritize patient health, they are more likely to provide comprehensive and effective treatment, leading to better health outcomes. 
        • Patients who experience positive results are more likely to trust and recommend the doctor to others.
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the Journal of the American Medical Association found that patients who were treated by doctors who were more likely to prioritize patient well-being were more likely to be satisfied with their care and to have better health outcomes. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Another study, published in the British Medical Journal, found that patients who were treated by doctors who were more likely to listen to their concerns and take them seriously were more likely to adhere to their treatment plans and to have better health outcomes.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Main idea: Doctors have a primary responsibility to prioritize patient health and well-being, regardless of their patients' wealth or status.
  • Supporting idea: 
    • Many doctors take the Hippocratic Oath, a solemn pledge that emphasizes the duty to put patients' interests above all else. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • This commitment reinforces the idea that patient health should be the primary concern.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Main idea: Profitable activities, such as plastic surgery and catering to the needs of the wealthy, continue to have a significant demand in our society, and doctors and professionals in these fields have every right to meet these demands, making their services integral to the modern world.
• Supporting idea: 
  • Regarding the field of plastic surgery, it serves more than just cosmetic purposes because many individuals seek it to address physical deformities or improve their overall quality of life. For example, procedures like breast reconstruction post-mastectomy or rhinoplasty for enhanced breathing can significantly enhance well-being.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
  • When it comes to taking care of the rich, catering to the needs of the affluent, often linked to high-end services like personal concierge services, luxury real estate, and private healthcare, not only generates employment opportunities but also fuels economic growth. In fact, the pivotal role of the wealthy in sustaining businesses, generating revenue, and supporting jobs in various sectors makes these activities a cornerstone of economic stability, providing resources for innovation and development that can benefit society as a whole.

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