Phân tích "Nowadays children spend more time on their phones. Some people think it is a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays children spend more time on their phones. Some people think it is a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Nowadays children spend more time on their phones. Some people think it is a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think it is a good idea 
    • Main idea 1: Advocates for children spending more time on their phones argue that technology offers educational benefits and enhances communication skills. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: Mobile devices provide access to a vast array of educational apps, online resources, and interactive learning platforms, allowing children to explore various subjects in an engaging manner.
      • Example: For instance, Khan Academy, an online educational platform, offers a wide range of subjects through interactive videos and quizzes, providing children with an engaging and personalized learning experience. 
    • Main idea 2: Moreover, the use of smartphones facilitates communication, enabling children to stay connected with friends and family, fostering social skills and relationships.
      • Example: Consider a scenario where a child uses a smartphone to video call a grandparent who lives in a different city. The ability to maintain regular communication through video calls not only nurtures the child's relationship with the grandparent but also enhances their social skills by allowing them to engage in meaningful conversations.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others disagree & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Excessive screen time and prolonged use of mobile phones may lead to various health issues in children, such as eye strain, disrupted sleep patterns, and even potential long-term effects on brain development.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Staring at screens for extended periods can strain the eyes and lead to symptoms such as dryness, irritation, headaches, and blurry vision, collectively known as digital eye strain or computer vision syndrome.
        • The blue light emitted by screens can interfere with the production of the sleep hormone melatonin, leading to difficulty falling asleep and disrupted sleep patterns.  >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8 [Audio+Transcript]
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal Pediatrics found that children who spent more than two hours a day on electronic devices were more likely to be overweight or obese than those who spent less than one hour a day. 
        • Another study, published in the journal Sleep, found that children who used electronic devices in the hour before bed were more likely to have trouble sleeping than those who did not use electronic devices before bed. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH  (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật)
    • Main idea 2: Young children may not fully understand the risks associated with online activities, making them vulnerable to cyberbullying, online predators, or exposure to inappropriate content.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Young children often exhibit a trusting nature, making them more susceptible to manipulation or deception by online predators who exploit their innocence and naivety. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) Some students work while studying. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion?NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Pediatrics" found that children as young as 8 years old are already aware of cyberbullying, but they may not fully understand the risks or how to protect themselves. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0)

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