Phân tích "Nowadays, children play computer games for long hours, and they do not play old traditional games. What do you think is the reason? Do you think this influences children in a good or a bad way?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, children play computer games for long hours, and they do not play old traditional games. What do you think is the reason? Do you think this influences children in a good or a bad way?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays, children play computer games for long hours, and they do not play old traditional games. What do you think is the reason? Do you think this influences children in a good or a bad way?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: The shift from traditional games to computer games among children can be attributed to several factors
    • Main idea 1: The rise of digital devices and technology has made computer games more accessible and appealing to children.
      • Supporting idea: The prevalence of smartphones, tablets, and computers means that digital devices capable of running games are readily available in many households.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: In 2021, a study by the Entertainment Software Association found that 75% of American households have at least one device capable of playing video games. This includes smartphones, tablets, computers, and consoles. The study also found that 72% of children under the age of 18 play video games on a regular basis.
    • Main idea 2: Children may be influenced by their peers, who may be playing computer games and discussing them, making them feel left out if they don't participate.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Peer pressure is a powerful force during childhood and adolescence. 
        • Children often want to conform to the behaviors and interests of their friends to feel accepted and avoid being seen as different or left out.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea 1: Spending excessive hours playing computer games can lead to physical health issues, such as sedentary behavior and eye strain.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Playing computer games often involves sitting for extended periods without physical activity. 
        • This sedentary behavior can contribute to various health problems, including obesity, muscle stiffness, and decreased cardiovascular fitness.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A 2020 study published in the journal Pediatrics found that children who spent more than two hours per day playing computer games were more likely to be overweight or obese than children who spent less than two hours per day on these activities. The study also found that children who played computer games for longer periods were more likely to have high blood pressure and high cholesterol.
    • Main idea 2: Some children may become addicted to gaming, neglecting other responsibilities and activities.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Video games often provide an escape from real-life stressors, problems, or responsibilities. 
        • Children may turn to gaming as a way to avoid dealing with difficult issues or emotions.

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