Phân tích"Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 16/9/2023)

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Celebrities often earn their income from the entertainment industry, which includes music, film, sports, and social media. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These industries generate substantial revenue through ticket sales, endorsements, merchandise, and advertising. 
        • The demand for entertainment products and services has led to higher salaries for celebrities due to market forces.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson is a classic example of a celebrity who earns a significant amount of income from the entertainment industry, including acting in blockbuster films, producing through his company Seven Bucks Productions, endorsing various brands, and selling merchandise, showcasing his multifaceted entrepreneurial success.
    • Main idea 2: Celebrities, particularly in the entertainment industry, have a global fan base. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Their appeal reaches across borders, allowing them to tap into international markets. 
        • Politicians typically work within their own country's political system, limiting their income potential to a national scale.
      • Example: 
        • BTS, the South Korean boy band, has achieved global success thanks to their catchy music, energetic performances, strong social media presence, international touring, collaborations with artists from around the world
        • In 2022, they were recognized as the highest-paid musical act by Forbes, earning an estimated $1.2 billion in the previous year, showcasing their unparalleled global influence and financial prowess.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - POSITIVE 
    • Main idea 1: The entertainment industry contributes significantly to the economy by creating jobs, generating revenue, and promoting tourism.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The entertainment industry generates significant revenue through various channels, including ticket sales, box office earnings, advertising, merchandise sales, streaming services, and licensing deals. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • This revenue not only benefits the entertainment companies themselves but also contributes to government tax revenues, which can be reinvested in public services and infrastructure.
    • Main idea 2: Celebrities often work hard to achieve their status and financial success through talent and dedication.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The entertainment industry is highly competitive, with numerous individuals vying for limited opportunities. 
        • To stand out, celebrities must continuously hone their skills and distinguish themselves from the competition.
      • Example: Beyoncé, who has been a part of the entertainment industry since childhood and is renowned for her powerful vocals, dynamic dance skills, and fierce stage presence, is not only a successful businesswoman with ventures such as her clothing and fragrance lines but also a dedicated role model, inspiring young individuals to pursue their dreams through unwavering commitment and continuous improvement.

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