Phân tích "Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ''Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: commercials aimed at children can have a detrimental impact, particularly on the relationship between parents and their children. 
      • Supporting idea: Many children are easily manipulated to want things they see in advertisements, and this may cause conflicts between parents and children if parents deny their children of something they want. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "parents" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, film heroes or favourite cartoon characters are often used in such attractive advertisements that children are lured and pester their parents to buy products advertised at any cost >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "product" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: advertising targeted at children can have negative effects on their health (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Fast food advertising has been known to be implicated in many health problems among children) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "negative" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As many fast food and junk food companies these days direct their marketing strategies towards children, making their products appear to be healthy and appealing. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: advertisements for fast foods and high sugar drinks might never reveal a fact that those products causes child obesity HOẶC: Food corporations promote their products using glamorous images of perfectly cooked meat, or alluring soda cans consumed by jubilant-looking and perfectly fit child actors.)
        • Inexperienced children do not know about the harms of their health when consuming those products >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH 
      • Example: 

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