Phân tích"Nowadays a lot of importance is given to the dress and appearance of celebrities; however, some people feel it is completely unnecessary. What is your opinion?"IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays a lot of importance is given to the dress and appearance of celebrities; however, some people feel it is completely unnecessary. What is your opinion?"IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Nowadays a lot of importance is given to the dress and appearance of celebrities; however, some people feel it is completely unnecessary. What is your opinion?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Placing too much emphasis on the attire and appearance of celebrities can detract from their actual talents or contributions. 
      • Supporting idea: While public figures often have a platform to influence society positively, an overemphasis on their appearance may overshadow their achievements in areas such as acting, music, or activism.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Consider a renowned actress known for her talent and dedication to impactful roles in thought-provoking films. Despite her significant contributions to the film industry and her advocacy for social causes, media outlets consistently focus on her appearance rather than her achievements.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Additionally, the intense scrutiny of celebrities' appearances can contribute to unhealthy beauty standards and body image issues. 
      • Supporting idea: The constant focus on how celebrities look may perpetuate unrealistic ideals, causing societal pressure and negatively impacting individuals' self-esteem.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: Kim Kardashian, a reality TV star and social media influencer, has faced both praise and criticism for her hourglass figure, but concerns arise as her use of editing tools to alter her appearance contributes to unrealistic beauty standards, perpetuating an unattainable "perfect" body ideal and potentially impacting the body image of vulnerable individuals, particularly the youth.

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