Phân tích "NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our personal energy consumption. What are the causes of the over-consumption of electricity? How can people be encouraged to use less energy?

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• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: commercials aimed at children can have a detrimental impact, particularly on the relationship between parents and their children. 
      • Supporting idea: Many children are easily manipulated to want things they see in advertisements, and this may cause conflicts between parents and children if parents deny their children of something they want. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "between" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, film heroes or favourite cartoon characters are often used in such attractive advertisements that children are lured and pester their parents to buy products advertised at any cost >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "parents" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: advertising targeted at children can have negative effects on their health (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Fast food advertising has been known to be implicated in many health problems among children) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "children/kid"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As many fast food and junk food companies these days direct their marketing strategies towards children, making their products appear to be healthy and appealing. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: advertisements for fast foods and high sugar drinks might never reveal a fact that those products causes child obesity HOẶC: Food corporations promote their products using glamorous images of perfectly cooked meat, or alluring soda cans consumed by jubilant-looking and perfectly fit child actors.)
        • Inexperienced children do not know about the harms of their health when consuming those products. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "product" tiếng anh

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