Phân tích"Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 questions
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi why
  • Triển khai 2 causes:
    • Cause 1: Di chuyển bằng bicycle mất thời gian hơn so với các phương tiện giao thông khác (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: It would consume a considerable amount of time to travel by this means of transport)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Since modern life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals nowadays want to spend as little time on transport as possible.
        • They prefer to use other types of vehicles such as motorbikes or cars which would take less time >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng prefer, would prefer, would rather, had better
      • Example: In cities like Amsterdam, where cycling is prevalent, opting for bicycles for commuting can lead to considerable time investment. Many residents, despite the cultural affinity for cycling, prioritize faster transportation options like trams or scooters to navigate the city efficiently amidst their busy schedules. 
    • Cause 2: Di chuyển bằng bicycle mất nhiều công sức hơn so với các phương tiện giao thông khác  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: it is rather impractical to expect cycling in cities, or even the countryside HOẶC cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car)
      • Supporting idea: This tends to discourage people from choosing this method, especially on a hot and sunny day or when they have to travel a long distance >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT JOURNEY, TRIP, TRAVEL & VOYAGE TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: In cities like New York or Tokyo, where traffic congestion is prevalent, cycling can be less practical than using public transportation or driving. This discourages many commuters from choosing cycling, particularly during rush hour or when navigating crowded streets.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi số 2  (nhớ là solution 1 phải giải quyết cho cause 1, solution 2 giải quyết cho cause 2)
  • Triển khai 2 Solutions ứng với 2 causes:
    • Solution 1: Tham khảo các mô hình bicycle sharing ở các nước phát triển như Singapore (IELTS TUTOR dịch: Referring to bicycle sharing models in developed countries like Singapore, where initiatives such as comprehensive bike lane networks, accessible rental stations, and user-friendly mobile apps have been successfully implemented, can provide valuable solutions)
      • Supporting idea: Many bike-sharing programs utilize user-friendly mobile apps that allow individuals to locate and unlock bikes, pay for rentals, and track their rides seamlessly.  
      • Example: A real-life example of a successful bicycle sharing program similar to those found in developed countries like Singapore is Citi Bike in New York City. Citi Bike boasts a network of thousands of bicycles stationed at hundreds of docking stations across the city. The program provides users with easy access to bikes for short trips around the city, with a user-friendly mobile app allowing for seamless rental and return.
    • Solution 2: Làm cho việc di chuyển bằng bicycle ít tốn công sức hơn bằng cách xây các nhà gas hơn người đi xe đạp có thể đem hẳn xe đạp lên tàu điện ngầm rồi đạp từ tàu điện ngầm về chỗ làm (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles)
      • Supporting idea: By building more lanes exclusively for cyclists, it would significantly reduce the effort required to navigate through traffic, making cycling a more appealing and efficient mode of transportation.
      • Example: A real-life example of making cycling less physically demanding through infrastructure improvement is seen in cities like Copenhagen, Denmark. Copenhagen has implemented an extensive network of dedicated bicycle lanes, separate from vehicle traffic, throughout the city. These lanes are well-maintained and designed to provide a smooth and safe route for cyclists, reducing the physical effort required to commute by bike.
• Tham khảo các Solutions khác mà IELTS TUTOR cung cấp:
  • Make it more costly to own a motorbike or a car >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng Topic Car IELTS 
  • Governments could conduct monthly green days that by law require citizens to cycle to work to get people involved in protecting their environment. In the long term, such an initiative would help to gradually form a habit of cycling among occupied individuals. >> IETLS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "SUCH" tiếng anh
  • Propagation via various means of media along with optional courses about the advantages of cycling to the environment at schools seem imperative to heighten social awareness of this matter.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In contemporary urban settings, the choice of transportation mode profoundly impacts daily routines. While bicycles offer a sustainable alternative, their adoption faces challenges due to time and effort constraints. However, there are solutions to improve this.

The decision to opt for alternative transportation modes over bicycles stems from two primary causes. Firstly, commuting via bicycles consumes considerable time due to the faster-paced nature of modern life. Since modern life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals nowadays want to spend as little time on transport as possible. They prefer to use other types of vehicles such as motorbikes or cars, which would take less time. Secondly, the physical exertion required for cycling discourages individuals, particularly in adverse weather conditions or over long distances. In cities like New York or Tokyo, where traffic congestion is prevalent, cycling can be less practical than using public transportation or driving. This discourages many commuters from choosing cycling, particularly during rush hour or when navigating crowded streets.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

There are many solutions to improve. Firstly, to mitigate the time constraint, adopting bicycle-sharing programs akin to those in Singapore can offer a solution. These initiatives provide user-friendly mobile apps and extensive bike lane networks, facilitating seamless rentals and rides. A real-life example of a successful bicycle sharing program similar to those found in developed countries like Singapore is Citi Bike in New York City. Citi Bike boasts a network of thousands of bicycles stationed at hundreds of docking stations across the city. The program provides users with easy access to bikes for short trips around the city, with a user-friendly mobile app allowing for seamless rental and return.Additionally, constructing dedicated bicycle lanes, as exemplified in cities like Copenhagen, reduces physical exertion and enhances cycling efficiency, thus addressing the reluctance to choose bicycles.

In conclusion, there are many reasons why bicycles are not popular. By embracing innovative solutions such as bicycle-sharing programs and infrastructure improvements, cities can encourage the widespread adoption of bicycles as a viable and sustainable mode of transportation, enriching urban mobility and promoting environmental conservation

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