Phân tích "Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: This admission fee can cover most basic operating costs, such as staff wages, electricity for complex lighting systems, and security.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Museums can use this money to enhance their performance (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they can invest that amount wisely to ensure a memorable experience for all museum-goers)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Museums can also utilize this financial support for renovation.
        • They can hire more curators to bring in more interesting collections, create more kids-friendly galleries, or even apply new technologies, like virtual reality or artificial intelligence. 
      • Example: For example, Vietnamese museums can benefit from this renovation since most of them are old. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "most of...." tiếng anh 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: This admission fee can cover most basic operating costs, such as staff wages, electricity for complex lighting systems, and security.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Museums can use this money to enhance their performance.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Museums can also utilize this financial support for renovation.
          • They can hire more curators to bring in more interesting collections, create more kids-friendly galleries, or even apply new technologies, like virtual reality or artificial intelligence. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng & ideas topic"Artificial Intelligence" 
        • Example: For example, Vietnamese museums can benefit from this renovation since most of them are old.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: If the admission fees are too high, this might discourage people from visiting museums. 
        • Supporting idea: This is especially true for poor people or those who do not have a source of income, such as high school and college students or starving artists >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Free museums are what lure tourists, especially those traveling with kids.
        • Supporting idea: This is because the entrance fee can affect the popularity of museums as the citizens will hesitate to visit museums, and this will majorly reduce the number of visitors
        • Example: 

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