Phân tích "Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi ngày 12/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi ngày 12/8/2023)

Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng PARTLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về  lí  do  mình ĐỒNG  Ý với quan điểm“they should focus purely on displaying works that represent the nation’s culture and history”
    • Main idea 1: Museums and art galleries should be places that honor indigenous history and culture. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By going to these museums and galleries, people will gain a deeper understanding of their nation, along with the golden ages and hard times that the country has been through. 
        • The exhibitions therefore serve an educational purpose as they instill patriotism and promote a sense of national pride in the citizens of that country. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The chance to visit a museum and see authentic documents from the past revitalises history and can inspire patriotism)
      • Example: The National Museum of the American Indian in Washington, D.C., United States, is devoted to the history, culture, and art of the indigenous peoples of the Americas, housing a collection of more than 800,000 objects, encompassing paintings, sculptures, textiles, and artifacts.
    • Main idea 2: Such places also help to preserve traditional and historical values. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In the 21st century, many minority ethnic groups are in grave danger of losing their culture, and therefore, the display of their works and artifacts will help to preserve their culture and the cultural diversity of a nation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "preserve" 
      • Example: Angkor Wat in Cambodia, a UNESCO World Heritage Site, is regarded as one of Southeast Asia's most crucial archaeological sites, constructed by the Khmer Empire in the 12th century and dedicated to the Hindu deity Vishnu.
• Body 2: Viết lí do  vì sao quan điểm ''international works are also of great worth” cũng  có  ý  đúng, chứ  không  có  sai    
  • Main idea 1: Works from other parts of the world help to diversify the content of museums and art galleries. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: international works will add appeal and aid museums and galleries in attracting more visitors)
    • Supporting idea: their failure in adopting changes and updating collections has discouraged people from visiting these places. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "collection" tiếng anh 
    • Example: For example, The British Museum in London famously contains one of the world’s largest collections of culturally significant artifacts from around the world. By seeing and reading the plaques for a variety of artworks both young students and adults alike have the opportunity to broaden their understanding of the traditions, cultures, and events that underpin the modern world.
  • Main idea 2: if museums display international works, people will have more chance to gain knowledge and insight into other cultures as well. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: This is because it exposes them to a diverse range of artistic expressions, historical narratives, and cultural contexts from around the world.
    • Example: The British Museum in London, England, houses a vast collection of over 8 million objects from around the world, encompassing artifacts from ancient Egypt, Greece, Rome, China, and numerous other cultures.

  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ý khác: international historical and cultural works would allow individuals to gain information on critical international issues that many countries face together. 
    • Example: the Melbourne Art Gallery has collections from across the globe in order to depict thoughts on poverty, war and trade, and in a survey, 88% of visitors declared that they felt more informed about such issues from the museum than from the news.

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