Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages > disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: One of the most significant advantages of studying abroad is the exposure to diverse cultures and perspectives. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When students immerse themselves in a foreign environment, they have the opportunity to interact with people from various backgrounds, fostering cultural awareness and tolerance. 
        • This not only enriches their personal lives but also prepares them to work in a globalized world where intercultural communication is crucial.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: A student from the United States studying abroad in Japan learns about Japanese culture, including the importance of respect for elders and the concept of wabi-sabi, celebrating the beauty of imperfection, while also forming friendships with Japanese students who share their lives and experiences with her.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: Studying abroad often provides access to high-quality education and specialized programs that may not be available in one's home country. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many universities worldwide are renowned for their expertise in specific fields, and students can benefit from learning under the guidance of experts in their chosen disciplines. 
        • This can significantly enhance their academic and career prospects.
      • Example: A student from India, passionate about studying environmental engineering but lacking such programs in her home country, opts to pursue her education abroad in the Netherlands, where she gains acceptance into a program ranked among the best globally.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: One of the most significant advantages of studying abroad is the exposure to diverse cultures and perspectives. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When students immerse themselves in a foreign environment, they have the opportunity to interact with people from various backgrounds, fostering cultural awareness and tolerance. 
          • This not only enriches their personal lives but also prepares them to work in a globalized world where intercultural communication is crucial.
        • Example: A student from the United States studying abroad in Japan learns about Japanese culture, including the importance of respect for elders and the concept of wabi-sabi, celebrating the beauty of imperfection, while also forming friendships with Japanese students who share their lives and experiences with her.
      • Main idea 2: Studying abroad often provides access to high-quality education and specialized programs that may not be available in one's home country. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Many universities worldwide are renowned for their expertise in specific fields, and students can benefit from learning under the guidance of experts in their chosen disciplines. 
          • This can significantly enhance their academic and career prospects.
        • Example: A student from India, passionate about studying environmental engineering but lacking such programs in her home country, opts to pursue her education abroad in the Netherlands, where she gains acceptance into a program ranked among the best globally.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: One of the main challenges is the financial burden that international education can impose on students and their families. 
        • Supporting idea: Tuition fees, living expenses, and travel costs can be substantial, making it unaffordable for some individuals.
        • Example: A student from a developing country aspiring to study in the United States faces the challenge of significantly higher tuition fees for international students compared to her home country, along with the additional financial burden of covering living expenses like accommodation, food, and transportation, making studying abroad a considerable financial challenge for both her and her family.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: Additionally, homesickness and cultural shock can lead to emotional and psychological challenges, affecting the overall well-being of students.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When students are far from home, they might initially struggle to make friends and establish a support network. 
          • This social isolation can lead to feelings of loneliness and sadness.
        • Example: A study published in the journal "Clinical Psychology Review" found that homesickness is a common experience for students who study abroad, with about 70% of students reporting feeling homesick at some point during their time abroad. The study also found that homesickness can have a negative impact on students' academic performance, social adjustment, and overall well-being

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