Phân tích"More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 25/2/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages 
      • Main idea: Financial Difficulties
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Those who move away from their friends and families will have to harness their financial management skills and find a way to pay for so many expenses without going broke.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "away" tiếng anh
        • All these expenses quickly add up and may easily drain their budget 
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages 
      • Main idea:  It is true that home is where the heart is, and having family members around for support can be an advantage
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Whatever happens, family members will be there to offer moral (and financial) support in times of trial and difficulties, to take care of us when we are sick or downhearted, to give us valuable advice, and help us get back on our feet again.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "chuyển nhà" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Moving out also forces people to learn some really important life skills
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Self-Esteem and Self-Reliance 
        • Supporting idea:
          • Moving out of home presents enormous challenges that require a lot of resourcefulness and resolution to overcome.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "move" tiếng anh
          • When people find a way to successfully solve any problem they encounter, to overcome any difficulty they are faced with, to achieve their ambitions and firmly follow their chosen path in life, their self-confidence and their self-esteem will definitely increase a great deal.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Financial Difficulties
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Those who move away from their friends and families will have to harness their financial management skills and find a way to pay for so many expenses without going broke.
          • All these expenses quickly add up and may easily drain their budget   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"spread"& phrasal verb"spread out"
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  It is true that home is where the heart is, and having family members around for support can be an advantage
        • Supporting idea: Whatever happens, family members will be there to offer moral (and financial) support in times of trial and difficulties, to take care of us when we are sick or downhearted, to give us valuable advice, and help us get back on our feet again.
        • Example: 

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