Phân tích"More and more people nowadays have overweight problems, and this seems to be the case for the entire world. What do you think causes this trend? Could you suggest some solutions to this problem?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More and more people nowadays have overweight problems, and this seems to be the case for the entire world. What do you think causes this trend? Could you suggest some solutions to this problem?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

More and more people nowadays have overweight problems, and this seems to be the case for the entire world. What do you think causes this trend? Could you suggest some solutions to this problem?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: The proliferation of processed and high-calorie foods, along with increased consumption of sugary beverages, has contributed to weight gain. 
      • Supporting idea: Diets high in sugar, saturated fats, and low in fruits and vegetables are major culprits.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: A stark real-life example of the impact of processed foods and sugary beverages on weight gain is the United States, where the obesity rate has surged from 15% in the 1970s to over 40% today, closely tied to increased consumption of these nutritionally poor, calorie-dense items.
    • Main idea 2: Modern technology and the rise of desk jobs have led to more sedentary lifestyles. 
      • Supporting idea: People are engaging in less physical activity, which can result in weight gain.
      • Example: A prime real-life example illustrating the impact of modern technology and desk jobs on sedentary lifestyles is the widespread use of smartphones and computers, enabling constant connectivity while contributing to extended periods of sitting and reduced physical activity.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Promote nutrition education in schools and communities to help individuals make healthier food choices.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: Nutrition education provides individuals with knowledge and skills to make informed and healthy food choices, empowering them to take control of their own health.
      • Example: A tangible real-life example of the benefits of nutrition education is the "Eat Smart, Play Hard" program in the United States, which has effectively improved children's knowledge of nutrition, increased fruit and vegetable consumption, and reduced the risk of obesity and overweight.
    • Main idea 2: Encourage physical activity through programs, incentives, and improved access to exercise facilities
      • Supporting idea: Regular physical activity is associated with numerous health benefits, including reduced risk of chronic diseases such as heart disease, diabetes, and obesity.

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