Phân tích "Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 24/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 24/3/2023)

Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Renovating existing buildings can preserve their historical or cultural significance and maintain their value as community assets >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt"historic" &"historical"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These buildings may have unique architectural features, design elements, or cultural significance that make them important to a community. 
        • By renovating these buildings, their historical and cultural significance can be maintained and celebrated, rather than being lost or forgotten.
      • Example: For example, renovating an old town hall or a historic building can help to maintain the character and charm of a neighborhood, attract tourists, and generate revenue for local businesses >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "attract" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Renovations can also be more environmentally friendly and cost-effective than building new structures from scratch as they can reuse existing materials and infrastructure.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Renovations can be more environmentally friendly because they can reduce the amount of waste generated from demolition and construction, and can reuse existing materials, which reduces the need for new resources. 
        • Renovating existing buildings can also preserve the existing infrastructure, such as the building's foundation, utilities, and electrical systems, which can reduce the overall cost of the project >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"preserve"tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, if a community wanted to build a new community center, they may need to demolish an existing building and construct a new one from scratch. This would generate a significant amount of waste and require new resources, such as steel, concrete, and wood. However, if the community renovated an existing building, they could reuse many of the existing materials, such as the bricks, windows, and doors. This would reduce waste and also reduce the cost of the project.

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