Phân tích "Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Technology has automated many routine and time-consuming tasks, such as data entry and record-keeping, which frees up time for employees to focus on higher-level tasks.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: In a human resources department, technology has automated the process of collecting and storing employee data, such as contact information, job titles, and performance evaluations.
    • Main idea 2: Modern technology has made it easier for colleagues and clients to communicate with each other, regardless of their location, through tools such as video conferencing and instant messaging.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example:  A team of designers in a global company can communicate with each other through video conferencing tools such as Zoom or Microsoft Teams to discuss the project's progress, share ideas and give feedback on each other's work. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Extended use of technology can cause physical and mental health issues, such as eye strain, headaches, and stress. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"issue"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The constant exposure to blue light from computer screens can disrupt the circadian rhythm, leading to sleep disturbances and increased stress levels. 
        • The use of smartphones, social media, and other digital tools can contribute to stress and anxiety, as employees may feel the need to be constantly connected and responsive to work-related messages outside of work hours. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: As more data is stored and shared digitally, there is a greater risk of cyber attacks and data breaches, which can compromise sensitive information and lead to reputational damage.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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