Phân tích "Some people say modern children's game do not develop a wide range of skills, while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say modern children's game do not develop a wide range of skills, while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people say modern children's game do not develop a wide range of skills, while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Traditional games help to develop much needed skills for today’s children like communication, problem-solving and socialisation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Traditional games are played mostly outdoors, and a lot of members are involved in it, so each member would get ample opportunity to interact with others closely. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: most of the traditional games were played outside with a lot of children, which nurtured their socialising skills, and almost all such games focused on the necessary skills of an individual needed for his survival)
        • Traditional games nurture the co-operation skills too in a child.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Traditional games help children to be a part of the nature and assist them to act responsibly in his surroundings >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "surroundings" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Themes or concepts of traditional games are mostly simple, and are closely related to the everyday social activities of people.
      • Example: For instance, there were a lot of traditional games which were related to agriculture and cultivation, which made children physically and mentally fit to take up related works in their future.

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