Phân tích "Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss of them and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss of them and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss of them and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm mobile phones are most useful for their professional lives
    • Main idea 1: For those who prioritize their professional lives, mobile phones can be essential tools for staying connected with colleagues and clients, accessing work-related information, and managing schedules and tasks. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"information"tiếng anh
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    • Main idea 2: With the increasing popularity of remote work, mobile phones have become even more important for professionals who need to stay connected and productive while on the go.
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  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm mobile phones are most useful in their personal lives & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: For those who prioritize their personal lives, mobile phones can be used for communication with friends and family, accessing social media and entertainment, and managing personal schedules and tasks. 
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    • Main idea 2: Mobile phones can also be used for safety and security, such as in emergency situations or while traveling alone. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ"mobile phones/mobiles"
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