Phân tích"Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa)

· Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
    • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
      • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
        • Main idea:  Some of the subjects like arts and literature can by no means be accomplished by memorizing information   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "succeed" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: 
          • Artists are never expected to learn the essence of art by memorizing others` works; otherwise the subject would be misunderstood. 
          • Likewise, a writer can never know how to write only by reciting articles collected from different areas.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "đối với tôi, về phần tôi"
      • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
        • Main idea:This learning method affects students’ understanding of the concept because memorized facts cannot be applied in practice.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Rote memorization discourages practical implementation.
          • Individuals solely dependent on memorization continue to use it even in their future careers, which becomes problematic in the workplace as they lack the ability to think, analyze, act, and promptly provide solutions   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Trước ngày thi IELTS 1 tháng nên làm gì?
        • Example: 
    • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
      • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
      • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
        • Main idea 1: By frequent repetition of the fundamental information learners can have a basic idea as for what the knowledge is and therefore better learn how to put it into practice
          • Supporting idea: Only by keeping the specific information in the mind can one adeptly take advantage of what he or she has learned.
          • Example: 
        • Main idea 2: rote memorization helps individuals to quickly remember and recall information when asked, which also develops their foundational knowledge.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng động từ "help"tiếng anh 
          • Supporting idea: 
            • Educational institutions have inadvertently constructed a system defining success based on students’ success at memorizing facts and information for exams
            • Memorization or rote learning has become a pillar of modern education. 
          • Example: 
      • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
        • Main idea 1: Some of the subjects like arts and literature can by no means be accomplished by memorizing information
          • Supporting idea:
          • Example: 
            • Artists are never expected to learn the essence of art by memorizing others` works; otherwise the subject would be misunderstood.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "help" tiếng anh
            • Likewise, a writer can never know how to write only by reciting articles collected from different areas.
        • Main idea 2: This learning method affects students’ understanding of the concept because memorized facts cannot be applied in practice.
          • Supporting idea:
            • Rote memorization discourages practical implementation.
            • Individuals solely dependent on memorization continue to use it even in their future careers, which becomes problematic in the workplace as they lack the ability to think, analyze, act, and promptly provide solutions   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cụm "in need of" tiếng anh
          • Example: 

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