Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week; some people see it as a good idea, while others don't. Compare different views of customers, shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week; some people see it as a good idea, while others don't. Compare different views of customers, shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE”Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week” có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE”Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week”
- Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ CUSTOMERS) Customers appreciate the convenience of round-the-clock access to shops.
- Supporting idea: They find it beneficial for their busy schedules or when unexpected needs arise outside regular business hours. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"BENEFICIAL"tiếng anh
- Example:
- Many gas stations are open 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. This makes it convenient for people to get gas, snacks, and other supplies at any time of day or night.
- Convenience stores are another type of shop that often offers round-the-clock access. They typically sell a wide variety of items, including food, drinks, snacks, household supplies, and even some basic clothing.
- Many pharmacies are open 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. This is especially convenient for people who need to get prescription medication or other medical supplies outside regular business hours.
- Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ SHOP WORKERS) Shop workers may appreciate the flexibility of working different shifts, including overnight hours.
- Supporting idea: It can offer employment opportunities for those who prefer non-traditional working hours or require additional income. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "employment" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Students who work part-time in retail may appreciate the flexibility of being able to work overnight hours. This allows them to work around their class schedule and still earn some money.
- People who want to avoid rush hour traffic may also appreciate the flexibility of working overnight hours. This allows them to commute to and from work during off-peak hours and avoid the crowds.
- Some people are simply night owls and prefer to work during the night. For these people, working overnight hours is a great way to fit their work schedule around their natural sleep patterns.
- Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ CUSTOMERS) Customers appreciate the convenience of round-the-clock access to shops.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE”Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week”
- Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ SOCIETY) 24/7 shops contribute to the economy by generating employment and extending consumer spending.
- Supporting idea: It enhances the competitiveness of businesses and helps meet the diverse needs of a dynamic society. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"diverse"tiếng anh
- Example: 24/7 shops create jobs and increase sales. They also provide a convenient place for people to shop, especially at night.
- Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ SOCIETY) 24/7 shops contribute to the economy by generating employment and extending consumer spending.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE”Many shops work for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week”
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