Phân tích "Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think the crime is a product of human nature and how can we prevent the children from growing up to be criminals?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think the crime is a product of human nature and how can we prevent the children from growing up to be criminals?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think the crime is a product of human nature and how can we prevent the children from growing up to be criminals?

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - DISAGREE (Crime is not solely a product of human nature; it emerges from a complex interplay of various influences)
    • Main idea 1: High levels of poverty, unemployment, and lack of economic opportunities can drive individuals to engage in criminal activities as a means of survival or to gain resources.
      • Supporting idea: When individuals are faced with few legitimate avenues to earn a living, they might resort to criminal activities out of desperation to meet basic needs like food, shelter, and clothing.
      • Example: In South Africa, a study by the Institute for Security Studies found that high levels of poverty and unemployment are major drivers of crime.
    • Main idea 2: Limited access to quality education can lead to reduced opportunities for individuals, increasing the likelihood of involvement in criminal behavior.
      • Supporting idea: A lack of education can contribute to financial instability, making individuals more susceptible to poverty and its associated challenges, which can lead to criminal behavior as a means of survival.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: In the United States, a study by the National Research Council found that children who grow up in poverty are more likely to drop out of school and to engage in criminal behavior.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Identifying risk factors early in a child's life, such as difficult family situations or behavioral issues, can allow for targeted support and intervention.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Early identification of risk factors can prevent the worsening of challenges. 
        • Addressing issues at an early stage can stop them from developing into more serious problems over time.
      • Example: In the United States, a study by the National Institute of Child Health and Human Development found that early intervention programs can be effective in reducing the risk of children developing behavioral problems.
    • Main idea 2: Providing access to quality education can equip children with essential life skills, help them make informed choices, and open up opportunities that deter criminal activities.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Quality education goes beyond academic knowledge, teaching crucial life skills such as communication, problem-solving, critical thinking, and decision-making.
        • These skills empower children to navigate challenges and conflicts constructively, reducing the likelihood of resorting to criminal behavior.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: In Vietnam, a study by the World Bank found that children who had access to quality education were less likely to engage in criminal activities.

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