Phân tích"Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 11/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 11/3/2023)

Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources.
    • Main idea 1: They provide access to physical copies of books and other materials that may not be available online >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Libraries often house a diverse collection of books, including rare or out-of-print editions, special collections, and historical documents. 
        • Many of these materials may not be readily available online, and physical copies in libraries allow patrons to access a broader range of resources.
      • Example: For instance, the British Library houses original Shakespeare manuscripts and Gutenberg Bibles, accessible only through physical visits.
    • Main idea 2: They also offer a quiet and peaceful environment for studying and research, which can be difficult to find in a noisy and distracting world. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Libraries are designed to be quiet spaces, conducive to focused concentration. 
        • This environment minimizes external distractions, allowing individuals to immerse themselves in their studies or research without the disruptions commonly found in more public spaces.
      • Example: Many libraries have dedicated reading rooms with soundproofed walls and limited distractions, ideal for focused reading and studying. Students preparing for exams, researchers delving into complex topics, or anyone seeking a moment of quiet contemplation can find solace in these spaces.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Many people think that libraries are essential for society. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Most information is now available online, and that digital resources are often more up-to-date and easier to access than physical copies of books >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "information" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Digital resources can be updated in real-time, allowing for immediate dissemination of the latest information. 
        • This is particularly crucial in fast-evolving fields such as technology, science, and current events, where information becomes outdated quickly. 
        • Unlike printed materials, digital content can be revised and updated continuously.
      • Example: Wikipedia is a prime example of how digital resources provide up-to-date information in real-time. As an online encyclopedia, Wikipedia allows users to access a vast array of information across various topics. The platform's collaborative nature enables contributors worldwide to update and edit content instantaneously.
    • Main idea 2: They also argue that libraries are expensive to maintain, and that the money and resources spent on libraries could be better used in other areas such as education and healthcare.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Libraries require substantial infrastructure, including buildings, utilities, and maintenance. 
        • Constructing and maintaining these physical structures can incur significant expenses, especially in urban areas where real estate costs are high
      • Example: For example, the construction of the new Stavros Niarchos Foundation Library in Athens, Greece, cost approximately €250 million.

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