Phân tích"Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Technology has made our lives more convenient than ever before   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "CONVENIENT" tiếng anh  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: technological devices like smartphones have incredible computing power – a power that we can use to make our life easier and more convenient)
      • Supporting idea: People can slip the devices in their bag or pocket and take them anywhere with ease.
      • Example:  Gone are the days when people had to go to the shopping mall to purchase goods or the banks for certain transactions, for example, fund transfer, paying bills or withdrawals. Now people can do shopping or make transactions through smartphones as it has heralded the new era of paperless money transactions. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: giving up modern technology would result in a much more complex society, and our lives will be difficult  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Modern technology has been integrated into nearly every field of our communities, taking control of many areas. 
        • Our recreational activities have become closely connected with such technology as well, such as online shopping, Internet banking service and video streaming service  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "convenient" tiếng anh
        • These modern inventions are exactly what makes our lives so colourful
      • Example: When the internet and phone technology were not popular in the past, a person needed to send a letter if he wanted to communicate with a friend far away.  In fact, the whole process was complicated and it could take days until the sender received a response  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "comfortable" tiếng anh

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