Phân tích"Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/11/2022 & 11/11/2023)

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Digital communication tools often interferes with the bonding time that people share and thus has a negative influence on interpersonal relationships.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ interfere trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Excessive use of digital communication tools can lead to a lack of face-to-face interaction, diminishing the depth of personal connections and non-verbal communication cues that are essential for building strong interpersonal relationships.
      • Example: 
        • For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socialising time for mobile game playing time, which would be likely to cause friends to drift apart in the long term  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cụm từ (phrase) tiếng anh
        • There are many real examples of couples on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social network applications on mobile phones, and they find it hard to maintain a sense of intimacy.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Modern communication technology discourages direct communication, and this will enhance invisible distance among people >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because we no longer have to visit others to get updates  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "update ...
        • The young prefer making friends online rather than mixing themselves in the real world
        • “Virtual” relationships are poor alternative / substitute for real ones
      • Example: The prevalence of social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram underscores how modern communication technology can hinder direct communication, fostering an invisible distance among people. Easy access to updates without face-to-face interactions reduces real-world socializing, and the younger generation's preference for online friendships reveals that virtual relationships, while convenient, often fall short of the depth and richness found in genuine, face-to-face connections.
         

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Modern communication technology is widely believed to have adverse effects on social relationships. I totally agree with this opinion because digital tools disrupt personal bonding time and encourage superficial, virtual connections over genuine, face-to-face interactions.

First of all, digital communication tools often interfere with quality bonding time that people share, thus negatively affecting interpersonal relationships. Excessive use of these tools reduces face-to-face interactions, which are crucial for building strong connections as they allow for deeper conversations and non-verbal cues. For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socializing to play mobile games, leading to friends drifting apart over time. Furthermore, numerous couples are on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social media platforms, making it difficult to maintain a sense of intimacy.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, modern technology discourages direct communication, fostering an invisible distance among people. This is because people no longer need to visit others or engage in meaningful conversations to get updates. For instance, young people today prefer making friends online rather than interacting in the real world. Such virtual relationships are a poor substitute for authentic connections as they lack the depth and emotional richness of in-person interactions. The prevalence of social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram highlights how modern communication tools create convenient yet superficial relationships that fail to fulfill people's social and emotional needs.

In conclusion, modern communication technology disrupts traditional social interactions and promotes virtual relationships that lack depth, ultimately weakening real-life connections.

New Vocabulary

1. Face-to-face interactions: (tương tác trực tiếp) Giao tiếp trực tiếp giữa người với người.
2. Sacrifice real-life socializing: (hi sinh thời gian giao tiếp ngoài đời thực) Dành thời gian cho hoạt động ảo thay vì gặp gỡ ngoài đời.
3. Drifting apart: (xa cách dần dần) Khi một mối quan hệ trở nên lạnh nhạt theo thời gian.
4. Virtual relationships: (mối quan hệ ảo) Quan hệ thông qua môi trường trực tuyến.
5. Substitute: (thay thế) Một lựa chọn thay thế nhưng không hoàn hảo.
6. Depth: (sự sâu sắc) Mức độ gần gũi, thấu hiểu trong một mối quan hệ.
7. Convenient yet superficial: (tiện lợi nhưng hời hợt) Dễ dàng thực hiện nhưng không có sự sâu sắc.

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