Phân tích"Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/11/2022 & 11/11/2023)

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Digital communication tools often interferes with the bonding time that people share and thus has a negative influence on interpersonal relationships.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ interfere trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Excessive use of digital communication tools can lead to a lack of face-to-face interaction, diminishing the depth of personal connections and non-verbal communication cues that are essential for building strong interpersonal relationships.
      • Example: 
        • For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socialising time for mobile game playing time, which would be likely to cause friends to drift apart in the long term  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cụm từ (phrase) tiếng anh
        • There are many real examples of couples on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social network applications on mobile phones, and they find it hard to maintain a sense of intimacy.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Modern communication technology discourages direct communication, and this will enhance invisible distance among people >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because we no longer have to visit others to get updates  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "update ...
        • The young prefer making friends online rather than mixing themselves in the real world
        • “Virtual” relationships are poor alternative / substitute for real ones
      • Example: The prevalence of social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram underscores how modern communication technology can hinder direct communication, fostering an invisible distance among people. Easy access to updates without face-to-face interactions reduces real-world socializing, and the younger generation's preference for online friendships reveals that virtual relationships, while convenient, often fall short of the depth and richness found in genuine, face-to-face connections.
         

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