Phân tích "Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/3/2023 & 21/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/3/2023)

Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

• Lưu ý ở đây đề đã cho sẵn cách triển khai nên các main idea nếu không liên quan đến cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom & the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems sẽ có khả năng sai task response nhé 
• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems
    • Main idea 1: The rise in the number of flights will increase the amount of jet fuel burnt in the air.
      • Supporting idea: Carbon emission and pollution will increase leading to global warming.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ 
      • Example: In the midst of the aviation boom in Southeast Asia, propelled by flourishing economies, the region faces a potential tripling of aviation emissions by 2040, according to a recent study by the International Energy Agency, emphasizing the urgent need for measures to curb emissions and promote sustainable aviation practices.
    • Main idea 2: cheap air tickets at times are extremely annoying in terms of certain conditions that go along with them.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • One problem is that the date and time cannot be changed once purchased. 
        • As a result, many people find it inconvenient if they are to reschedule due to emergency.
      • Example: Sarah, a budget-savvy backpacker, faced a financial and emotional setback when her fixed-date ticket to Thailand, secured at a dirt-cheap price, became non-refundable, forcing her to forfeit the flight and navigate the unexpected challenges of reaching her destination amid her grandmother's illness.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Most of the people now have equal opportunity to explore the world all because of cheap flights>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: Traveling by air used to be a luxurious method of travel; however, low cost airlines such as Air Asia and Vietjet Air have given the opportunity for ordinary people to travel abroad with inexpensive flight to gain more knowledge
      • Example: Mr. Nguyen, a factory worker in Ho Chi Minh City, envisions exploring the ancient temples of Angkor Wat in Cambodia, made possible by a $50 return flight on Vietjet Air, offering him an affordable opportunity to firsthand experience a different culture and broaden his understanding of history and religion beyond his home city.
    • Main idea 2: Cheap air flight enables intercultural exchanges between countries. The advent of cheap air fare makes it possible for people the world over to travel regularly, regardless of the purpose of the trip.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People have the opportunities to learn from different cultures and have a better understanding of countries they used to be unfamiliar with. 
        • This, in turn, enhances cultural communications between countries.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫnParaphrase từ "increase/rocket"

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