Phân tích "Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about the balance between work and life?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about the balance between work and life?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about the balance between work and life?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - disadvantages > advantages 
    • Main idea 1: One of the biggest disadvantages of traveling far for work or spending more hours working is that it can lead to a reduced work-life balance. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that people may have less time for their personal lives, such as spending time with family and friends or pursuing hobbies.
      • Example: The engineer's work schedule is demanding, with long hours and frequent travel, leaving little time for personal life. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của từ "demand" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Traveling far for work or spending more hours working can also lead to increased stress levels. 
      • Supporting idea: This is because people may feel pressure to perform well at work or to make up for the time they are not spending at home.
      • Example: The doctor has long work hours and frequent travel, leaving little time for her personal life. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"personal"tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea: The balance between work and life is important for everyone. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Maintaining a balance between work and life allows individuals to prioritize their physical and mental well-being. It helps prevent burnout, stress-related illnesses, and emotional exhaustion. 
        • Taking time for personal interests, hobbies, and relationships outside of work promotes overall happiness and reduces the risk of health problems caused by excessive work-related stress. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"reduce"tiếng anh 
        • It is important to find a way to work hard and be successful, while also having time for your personal life.
      • Example: 

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