Phân tích"Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How this problem can be overcome?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 23/7/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How this problem can be overcome?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

• Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this?  How this problem can be overcome?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: One of the major factors is the increased workload that many people have to deal with. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Today, most people work in office-related jobs, and their employers expect them to stay longer or be available outside traditional office hours.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "overwhelm" tiếng anh 
        • The economic stagnation has made the labour market increasingly competitive, so workers are under pressure to cooperate in this process, making the situation worse. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác:  In order to ensure their job security, employees are forced to spend more time at the workplace, this in turn deducts the time they get to spend with their family) 
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    • Main idea 2: People are more attracted to material comforts, and they are keen to work hard and earn more money in order to satisfy these cravings / these wants   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "satisfied" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: Spending overtime at the workplace will help them to earn more money as they earn overtime allowances apart from their regular salary.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: The government should limit the work hours and spend the rest of their time with the family.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác:  A strict law should be imposed in order to limit the working hours)
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:  Spending less money could mean fewer work hours and more time for a rewarding life.
      • Supporting idea: Research shows that once our basic needs are met, a higher income does not necessarily lead to happiness   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt limit & limitation tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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