Phân tích"​Many people depend on cars in their day-to-day life (for example, to drive to work). However, unrestricted car use has led to a number of problems. What are these problems? Should individuals be discouraged from using cars in order to reduce them?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi 1/10/2022 computer-based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "​Many people depend on cars in their day-to-day life (for example, to drive to work). However, unrestricted car use has led to a number of problems. What are these problems? Should individuals be discouraged from using cars in order to reduce them?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi 1/10/2022 computer-based)

Many people depend on cars in their day-to-day life (for example, to drive to work). However, unrestricted car use has led to a number of problems. What are these problems? Should individuals be discouraged from using cars in order to reduce them?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Traffic congestion kills valuable time, which severely impacts people’s productivity and the nation’s economy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: As more and more people drive to work rather than walk, cycle or take public transport, there are heavy traffic jams almost every day at rush hours.
      • Example: For instance, a recent survey outlines that traffic bottlenecks alone cause 7.8 billion dollar losses each year in our country.
    • Main idea 2: Environmental problems that stem from unchecked use of cars is perhaps the greatest problem of all as cars directly contribute to climate change, air and noise pollution (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The widespread use of cars has real environmental costs)
      • Supporting idea:  
        • It is reported that road traffic is the source of one-third of all harmful air pollution in the world. 
        • Car exhaust contributes to acid rain, carbon dioxide and lead, which cause global warming and damage human health. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Exhaust fumes from private vehicles exacerbate the existing greenhouse effects, which speeds up global warming) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "vehicle" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NO 
    • Main idea 1: car restriction is not easy to carry out because cars are the champion on the road for they grant their users liberty and flexibility in terms of travelling.
      • Supporting idea: This would lead to reduced mobility for people and restrict their freedom
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: A better solution would be for car manufacturers to design more environmentally friendly cars, which run on solar power or hydrogen. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ideas khác:
    • The government can perhaps look into the development of environmentally friendly technology for cars such as the replacement of petrol with renewable energy. 
    • The state can strengthen public transport systems and offer citizens with incentives for them to make a switch over. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "Citizen" tiếng anh
    • Traffic problems can be alleviated by building more underground tunnels and parking garages, and safety problems can be avoided by educating drivers as well as pedestrians to use greater caution on the road. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "problem" tiếng anh

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