Phân tích"Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development? " IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/12/2022 & 3/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development? " IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/12/2022 & 3/10/2023)

Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why ?
  • Main idea 1: travelling among the countries and continents has become easy. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • The improved means of transformation connect different corners of the world with better roads, increased airlines and metro trains (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The advancement in transportation sector has made it easier for people to travel more)
      • Air travel has become considerably cheap; as a result, more and more people can visit foreign countries (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The cheap and convenient air travel facility attracts more and more people to travel to new places)
    • Example: One real-life example of the ease of international travel is the significant growth in international tourism, with a ninefold increase in tourist arrivals from 1970 to 2019. This surge is largely attributed to improved means of transportation, including affordable air travel and advanced transportation infrastructure like high-speed trains and highways, facilitating global mobility.

  • Main idea 2: The business and trade opportunity across the border is another reason people travel frequently nowadays than before. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: The employees of multinational companies often need to attend seminar, training, business meeting and that’s why they very often travel.
    • Example: For example, Apple is a multinational company with headquarters in the United States. Apple has employees who travel frequently between the United States and China, where many of its products are manufactured. Apple also has employees who travel to other countries around the world to market and sell its products.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Is it a positive or negative development? - POSITIVE >> IETLS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
  • Main idea 1: Travelling is a part of education and it enhances the knowledge and experience of travelers.
    • Supporting idea:
      • Traveling gives the firsthand experience of different customs and traditions.
      • Travelling widen the view and perspective of the travelers.
    • Example: Study abroad programs serve as a real-life example of how travel is an integral part of education, offering students the chance to immerse themselves in diverse cultures, gain firsthand global perspectives, and develop a more profound understanding of the world through international academic experiences.

  • Main idea 2: Traveling gives us the opportunity to disconnect from our regular monotonous life and refreshes us.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Travelling with family and friends often becomes our sweet memory in life. 
      • Travelling in new places often erase our stress and bad memories.
    • Example: Vacations serve as a real-life example of how traveling provides the chance to disconnect from the monotony of everyday life, offering relaxation, stress relief, and the creation of cherished memories with loved ones.

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